- We could create a lot of suspense with our opening sequence (when the ex boyfriend is approaching the girl on the phone) he could approach slowly so the audience knows something that a character in the film does not.
- With the flash backs where happier times are shown when the girlfriend and boyfriend were together we could make them really short - almost just snippets. This would not run the risk of the flash back looking cheesy.
- There are a lot of point of view shots in our piece which is conventional to a thriller meaning that it is likely to work.
Wednesday, 27 January 2010
Feedback recieved from the pitch
Once pitching our idea to the group this is the feedback that we received:
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