Feedback recieved from the pitch

Once pitching our idea to the group this is the feedback that we received:

• We could create a lot of suspense with our opening sequence (when the ex boyfriend is approaching the girl on the phone) he could approach slowly so the audience knows something that a character in the film does not.
• With the flash backs where happier times are shown when the girlfriend and boyfriend were together we could make them really short - almost just snippets. This would not run the risk of the flash back looking cheesy.
  
• There are a lot of point of view shots in our piece which is conventional to a thriller meaning that it is likely to work.